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The Stivichall Investigation

[1. investigation process
[2.
investigation headquarters
[3. what we like/don't like about school

[4. questions and answers

[5. surprise poems
[this page]
[6. close up on the Dell
[7. important things
[8. the fact finding mission
[9. the design brief
[10. design & consultation

[11.
installing the artwork
[12. unveiling the artwork
[13
. what happens next ?

[* WHY WE NEED YOUR HELP!


5. Surprise Poems

We sat down to look at the Dell, and the surprising thing was that the longer we sat and looked, the quieter and calmer everyone became. We had a sheet of paper on which we had to record what we could see and hear.

When we'd all finished writing, Janet [chief investigator] asked us to cross certain words out, and when we read back the words that were left on the page, we realised we'd written some pretty good poems about the Dell. [see below for a few examples].


Ashes from a bonfire
Trees rustling in the wind
Grass and mud
Daisies and twigs
Different to any other place

A big, fat stump of a tree
The wind wooshing by me
The fresh air, the grass
Concrete, nettles, ash
I am free and relaxed

Concrete steps
Children playing
Air grass
Metal ash
So relaxed, I want to run round but I can't be bothered!

Nettles that can sting you
Cars outside
Flowers that are daisies
Grass and leaves, concrete and trees
Overgrown and dark
There's hardly any sun.

An old tree stump
Cars going by
Green grass
My own bumpy cap
Very calm and quiet


Ashes from the old rusty barbeque float in the cool air
A gentle breeze rustles through the trees
The grass and all the trees around me
The air rushing through my hands
Peaceful and soothing

Barking and quiet that really stands out
Birds flying near the ear
The fresh air
Tickly grass
Like a bee


Lots of trees and bushes
Music from the cars
People that are sweaty
Lots of leaves
Like the jungle with no animals

A lonely old tree
The sweet sound of birds singing
The fresh air right in front of me
The smooth grass
Am I on holiday ?

Big trees
Sky aeroplane
The sweet sound of birds
Blossom
The grass and the trees
Sad no-one looks after the nettles



the investigation team contemplating the dell


Find out more about the Investigation by following the links below:

[1. investigation process
[2.
investigation headquarters
[3. what we like/don't like about school

[4. questions and answers

[5. surprise poems
[this page]
[6. close up on the Dell
[7. important things
[8. the fact finding mission
[9. the design brief
[10. design & consultation

[11.
installing the artwork
[12. unveiling the artwork
[13
. what happens next ?

[* WHY WE NEED YOUR HELP!

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